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Posted 12/6/2006 7:30:01 AM Post #2075
 

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I tried requesting a critque for this image but it does not seem to be working so I am requesting a critique here

Could you please tell me how I can improve this image if at all?  I wanted a subtle soft image focusing on the tones of leaf/log as I find them beautiful.

Let me know if this image also has a lot of no-no's and your general impression..Thank you all so very much.

edited 'cause I forgot the link..duh...

http://www.dailyawards.com/image_viewer.aspx?ImageID=49373


 

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Posted 12/6/2006 12:31:33 PM Post #2079
 

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Tonka, I think this is a great photo.

I don't like so much the right bottom corner. I can see that there is something but it is not light enough to see what it is. And the left and rite upper corners are starting to go soft to early. Some of the leaf is loosing detail.


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Posted 12/6/2006 4:15:53 PM Post #2087
 

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Thanks O,

that is kinda what I figured and I went back and forth between whether I liked that about it or not..couldnt make up my mind.  I will play with it a little more I suppose ...thanks so much for giving me your thoughts.


 

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Posted 12/7/2006 7:58:36 AM Post #2101
 

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Well, to confuse you further...I kinda like the dark area in the lower right and I don't mind the blur just like it is. What I would like, though, is if there
was more space at the top and on the left. I would like to see more of the tree and to see the leaf in the lower right of the frame (a little less cramped).

There's my 2 cents



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Posted 12/7/2006 8:51:29 AM Post #2107
 

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NIki....

I am rollin on the floor here lol..

You know I cut out that area cause I didn't think the majority would like it in there hahahah,,, stop confusing me.....snickering,,,,,sounds like you have the same feelings I do about the photo...too funny. I will go and "unedit" and repost I guess as "unre-edited"  hee.


 

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Posted 12/7/2006 9:09:25 AM Post #2108
 

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Alrighty then,

Here is the orginal photo,,, in picasa2 I hit the sharpen tool just once , otherwise unedited..

Tell me what you think..(anyone)

thanks,

be waiting for your thoughts too Niki..


 

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Posted 12/7/2006 1:37:29 PM Post #2117
 

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Hmmm, I will see what I can do with it..

Thanks for your thoughts on this Blue, they are always appreciated


 

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Posted 12/7/2006 1:40:05 PM Post #2118
 

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Edited to say....geez loueeze, I have been having problems all day...I had the wrong page before, this one should work...

http://www.dailyawards.com/image_viewer.aspx?ImageID=49572

OOOOPS I forgot to include the link of the "unedited" version....lol...

Okay so which one is better? and what would you do with it?

Thank you thank you thank you...


 

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Posted 12/7/2006 1:51:22 PM Post #2119
 

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