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Posted 7/7/2007 11:01:05 PM Post #12790
 

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This is one of my favorite shots. This photo was taken at a warehouse fire. As I was leaving, I noticed how the Rescue was parked, overlooking the fire scene and with it becoming daylight, I thought it would be a really cool shot to take..

As always, thanks for the feedback/suggestions..

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Posted 7/8/2007 8:42:49 AM Post #12815
 

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Hi FD, it seems a little out of focus (OOF) to me. Also, that lamp post coming out of the roof of the firetruck sorta distracts me, as well as the car parked to the left. If you can, you could always clone them out.

 I really like the early morning light and colors that you captured. 

Again, this is only my opinion!!!  

Posted 7/8/2007 11:25:58 AM Post #12834
 

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Sherry (7/8/2007)
Hi FD, it seems a little out of focus (OOF) to me. Also, that lamp post coming out of the roof of the firetruck sorta distracts me, as well as the car parked to the left. If you can, you could always clone them out.

 I really like the early morning light and colors that you captured. 

Again, this is only my opinion!!!  

 

No problem, Thanks for your opinion..Always appreciated..

Posted 7/10/2007 8:37:10 AM Post #12984
 

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It's too soft, and the lighting is not well balanced.  The reflective paint on the truck has sent so much of your flash back at the camera that the rest of the shot has become underexposed.  If the subject and background were static, perhaps a longer exposure from a tripod without flash would have yielded better results.
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