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Posted 7/6/2007 10:36:45 PM Post #12722
 

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I've added two other photos..Please let me know what you think and thanks for checking them out!!

http://www.dailyawards.com/image_viewer.aspx?ImageID=80363

http://www.dailyawards.com/image_viewer.aspx?ImageID=80362

Posted 7/7/2007 5:02:17 AM Post #12725
 

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wow, I really like both of those!
One suggestion on the first one.Use PS and tone down the white on the firetruck using the burn tool.
Posted 7/7/2007 6:23:27 AM Post #12735
 

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Carol (7/7/2007)
wow, I really like both of those!
One suggestion on the first one.Use PS and tone down the white on the firetruck using the burn tool.

Thanks!, Dumb question here, What is PS???

Posted 7/7/2007 7:56:15 AM Post #12743
 

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Posted 7/7/2007 7:57:12 AM Post #12744
 

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I really like the first shot! The glow on the firetruck adds an interesting effect to me...and does not distract.

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Posted 7/7/2007 10:54:05 AM Post #12761
 

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HI FD, welcome to DA!!!

Although I may not be able to give you certain technical critiques (hopefully the others will chime in too), instead I'll offer my opinion.

The Lone firefighter is a great shot! The hose offers a nice straight line from the firefighter right to the truck... which shows a fantastic reflection! Both subjects are clear, sharp and have nice colors, the smoke is visible and really adds to the composition. The scene is definately set with this image!!! Nice work!

It's through the roof has great lighting from that intense fire burning, wow!     In this one, it's difficult to really see the men and the ladders. The dormer window is the only thing that gives it away that they're on the rooftop. For me, this one would need a little more focus, just to get past that intense fire heat and smoke. But, it's another great action shot, and I look forward to seeing more!!! 

Posted 7/7/2007 9:19:37 PM Post #12783
 

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I looked at your images about firefighters.

I think both do not have the right exposure. Perhaps you need to improve it.

I was born and brought up in Iran, a beautiful country full of history.

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Posted 7/7/2007 11:01:58 PM Post #12791
 

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HI FD, welcome to DA!!!

Although I may not be able to give you certain technical critiques (hopefully the others will chime in too), instead I'll offer my opinion.

The Lone firefighter is a great shot! The hose offers a nice straight line from the firefighter right to the truck... which shows a fantastic reflection! Both subjects are clear, sharp and have nice colors, the smoke is visible and really adds to the composition. The scene is definately set with this image!!! Nice work!

It's through the roof has great lighting from that intense fire burning, wow!     In this one, it's difficult to really see the men and the ladders. The dormer window is the only thing that gives it away that they're on the rooftop. For me, this one would need a little more focus, just to get past that intense fire heat and smoke. But, it's another great action shot, and I look forward to seeing more!!! 

 

Sherry, Thanks for your comments!!, I appreciate it..

Posted 7/7/2007 11:02:26 PM Post #12792
 

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I looked at your images about firefighters.

I think both do not have the right exposure. Perhaps you need to improve it.

 

Thanks for your comments!

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