Posted 6/27/2007 12:59:51 AM
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Hi
Like I said, I want some feeback on this photo. I love takin' pictures, Im tryin to get better. So feed would be great! and guys, be real to me This haven't been in photoshop yet..

Thank you guys, Trond Stegarud
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Posted 6/27/2007 2:58:57 AM
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| Your shot shows an appealing concept, and I see no technical flaws. However the composition is a little out of balance. I think it would be more interesting if the leaves from the overhead branch did not come down to the subject's head, and if the bright area at the center was slightly darker to match the area on the other side of the subject. It might look better cropped tighter, crop off half of the black as measured along the left side, and crop the right side to get rid of the branches. The border is minimal but doesn't really add anything to the shot.
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Posted 6/27/2007 5:45:14 AM
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hi, and thank you for the tips greate! It helps. Anyone else wanna say something? good or bad
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Posted 6/27/2007 5:51:11 AM
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| Hey Tassen! Welcome... I like the "mood" in this image... One thing that came to my mind is if you had a chance to reshoot this or something similar,,,I thought,,,it would be very poignant if the subject were silhoutted in one of the "light" spots in the sky, instead of under the tree...the light spot on the right actually ..but that was just an idea...I also agree with the other suggestions as well... ... Although I would also try different monotones as well with this image... Just my thoughts...
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Posted 7/1/2007 7:13:18 AM
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hi, thank you for the post
anyone else?
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Posted 7/7/2007 10:32:30 PM
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Posted 7/11/2007 4:48:19 AM
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you cant see it? well its there  Can you see it now?
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