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Posted 10/30/2006 1:08:13 PM Post #182
 

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can anyone suggest on how to improve thsi photo?

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Posted 12/2/2006 3:00:50 PM Post #1929
 

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I see there are no replies yet here...(come on you guys....), I am not the best with critiques but here are my thoughts..

I do not know what software you have available but if it were my photo first I would see what it looks like in B&W,  I might sharpen it a tad and use a different tint either partially or wholly.

Is this photo cropped? if so I would pull it back as it seems a little close for me.  I might try desaturating some as well,, take a little color out of the flower as it is very bright..

Again, some help here cause I am not the best at this stuff....but I tried, this is all I have to offer and only my opinion on it Hope I helped .


 

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Posted 12/2/2006 4:40:36 PM Post #1936
 

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HI!

I tend to agree with Tonka about the crop, but I actually like the colors. I am a huge fan of B&W and imagine it would also look nice that way to.

It seems to have a couple overly bright spots on the petals, but that might just be my eyes. (Not to good..lol!)

I  also would suggest trying to change the page color to black and see how it looks . I am not to fond of the grey background.

I am not the best at critiques, (just an amatuer), and think overall it's a pretty shot.

Good Luck!

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